Shivers

Ocean shimmers under iced-kissed skies, crystal waters freeze the silken shore. We inhale the chilled mist of biting winds, cleansing soreness from our pined outpour We stroll on thick mittens, hand in hand, squeeze cool, sharp flakes between our toes. Grizzly waters lap our sandal strands shiver the beach, the Ice King wears the crown. Ice King Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Moore Avatar
September 14, 2013 at 3:24 PM
i really like the overall feel of the icy coldness of this tina x
Kendrick Avatar
August 22, 2013 at 12:45 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative winning work..This one has great poetic qualities with great rhythm, rhyme, and flow..Congrats on your win.Sara
Morgan Avatar
August 21, 2013 at 4:52 PM
very nice Congrats on your win. Morgan
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August 19, 2013 at 5:01 PM
Hi Carly, , love the win, and icy feeling after reading your poem. Congratulations... luv~ LINDA
Andresen Avatar
August 19, 2013 at 2:20 PM
- It was nice to take part in this contest, I like your suggestion - very good poem. - Congratulations on a great win, Carly! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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August 19, 2013 at 2:05 PM
HI CARLY, ! Thank you for the Ice King Adventure...... Enjoy my latest blog "I got chills they're multiplying" inspired by all winning poems. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=495082#comments (-: Congratulations :-) ~SKAT~
A  Avatar
August 6, 2013 at 8:57 AM
Carly I hope you get this message. I re-opened my contest in hopes you submit this entry. The Ice-King contest is opened till tomorrow night... love ~SKAT~
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