Shivers

Ocean shimmers under iced-kissed skies, crystal waters freeze the silken shore. We inhale the chilled mist of biting winds, cleansing soreness from our pined outpour We stroll on thick mittens, hand in hand, squeeze cool, sharp flakes between our toes. Grizzly waters lap our sandal strands shiver the beach, the Ice King wears the crown. Ice King Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 9/14/2013 3:24:00 PM
i really like the overall feel of the icy coldness of this tina x
Login to Reply
Date: 8/22/2013 12:45:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative winning work..This one has great poetic qualities with great rhythm, rhyme, and flow..Congrats on your win.Sara
Login to Reply
Date: 8/21/2013 4:52:00 PM
very nice Congrats on your win. Morgan
Login to Reply
Date: 8/19/2013 5:01:00 PM
Hi Carly, , love the win, and icy feeling after reading your poem. Congratulations... luv~ LINDA
Login to Reply
Date: 8/19/2013 2:20:00 PM
- It was nice to take part in this contest, I like your suggestion - very good poem. - Congratulations on a great win, Carly! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Date: 8/19/2013 2:05:00 PM
HI CARLY, ! Thank you for the Ice King Adventure...... Enjoy my latest blog "I got chills they're multiplying" inspired by all winning poems. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poems_poets/poem_detail.aspx?ID=495082#comments (-: Congratulations :-) ~SKAT~
Login to Reply
Date: 8/6/2013 8:57:00 AM
Carly I hope you get this message. I re-opened my contest in hopes you submit this entry. The Ice-King contest is opened till tomorrow night... love ~SKAT~
Login to Reply
Get a Premium Membership
Get more exposure for your poetry and more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Reflection on the Important Things

Member Area

My Admin
Profile and Settings
Edit My Poems
Edit My Quotes
Edit My Short Stories
Edit My Articles
My Comments Inboxes
My Comments Outboxes
Soup Mail
Poetry Contests
Contest Results/Status
Followers
Poems of Poets I Follow
Friend Builder

Soup Social

Poetry Forum
New/Upcoming Features
The Wall
Soup Facebook Page
Who is Online
Link to Us

Member Poems

Poems - Top 100 New
Poems - Top 100 All-Time
Poems - Best
Poems - by Topic
Poems - New (All)
Poems - New (PM)
Poems - New by Poet
Poems - Read
Poems - Unread

Member Poets

Poets - Best New
Poets - New
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems
Poets - Top 100 Most Poems Recent
Poets - Top 100 Community
Poets - Top 100 Contest

Famous Poems

Famous Poems - African American
Famous Poems - Best
Famous Poems - Classical
Famous Poems - English
Famous Poems - Haiku
Famous Poems - Love
Famous Poems - Short
Famous Poems - Top 100

Famous Poets

Famous Poets - Living
Famous Poets - Most Popular
Famous Poets - Top 100
Famous Poets - Best
Famous Poets - Women
Famous Poets - African American
Famous Poets - Beat
Famous Poets - Cinquain
Famous Poets - Classical
Famous Poets - English
Famous Poets - Haiku
Famous Poets - Hindi
Famous Poets - Jewish
Famous Poets - Love
Famous Poets - Metaphysical
Famous Poets - Modern
Famous Poets - Punjabi
Famous Poets - Romantic
Famous Poets - Spanish
Famous Poets - Suicidal
Famous Poets - Urdu
Famous Poets - War

Poetry Resources

Anagrams
Bible
Book Store
Character Counter
Cliché Finder
Poetry Clichés
Common Words
Copyright Information
Grammar
Grammar Checker
Homonym
Homophones
How to Write a Poem
Lyrics
Love Poem Generator
New Poetic Forms
Plagiarism Checker
Poetics
Poetry Art
Publishing
Random Word Generator
Spell Checker
Store
What is Good Poetry?
Word Counter
Hide Ad