Ship Shape

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I met my husband on Valentine's Day!

SHIP SHAPE \O/ \O/ 0 0 / \ / \ ---------------------------------- /////////////////////////////////// //////////////////////////////////XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX XXXXXXXXX /////////////////////////////////XXXXXX TWO AT THE OARS,XXXX XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX XXXXXXXXXXXXXXX“SEA”ZING THE DAYXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX XXXXXXXXXXXMARRIAGE WITH ITS CHALLENGESXXXXXXXXXXXXX XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX XXXXPULLING MEMORIES TOWARD DEEP, TOWARD SHORE. XXXXXX XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX *** I SPIED MY SAUCY SAILOR GUY IN SHIP SHAPE UNIFORM *** XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX XXXX I FELL IN STRONG. I FELL IN LOVE. XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX 2/14/2017 VALENTINE’S DAY

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/16/2017 6:03:00 PM

Wonderful and creative, Kim! I'm terrible at shape poems so I am beyond impress when I see (and read) a good one!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/16/2017 6:20:00 PM

Thank you, Rhonda!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/14/2017 5:10:00 PM

this is so creative!!! I always avoid this kind of challenge. You were brave!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/14/2017 5:13:00 PM

Thanks, Andrea! At first I used squiggly line for the water but it would not work on PS then I had to cut down the line size. Challenge is making it work. Happy Valentine's Day!