Kim Rodrigues Poet Shape

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I met my husband on Valentine's Day!

Ship Shape

SHIP SHAPE


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/////////////////////////////////XXXXXX   TWO AT THE OARS,XXXX
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XXXXXXXXXXXXXXX“SEA”ZING THE DAYXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
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XXXXXXXXXXXMARRIAGE WITH ITS CHALLENGESXXXXXXXXXXXXX
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XXXXPULLING MEMORIES TOWARD DEEP, TOWARD SHORE. XXXXXX
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*** I SPIED MY SAUCY SAILOR GUY IN SHIP SHAPE UNIFORM ***
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XXXX I FELL IN STRONG. I FELL IN LOVE. XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX
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2/14/2017 VALENTINE’S DAY

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders February 16, 2017 at 6:03 PM Wonderful and creative, Kim! I'm terrible at shape poems so I am beyond impress when I see (and read) a good one! Kim Rodrigues February 16, 2017 at 6:20 PM Thank you, Rhonda!

Andrea Dietrich February 14, 2017 at 5:10 PM this is so creative!!! I always avoid this kind of challenge. You were brave! Kim Rodrigues February 14, 2017 at 5:13 PM Thanks, Andrea! At first I used squiggly line for the water but it would not work on PS then I had to cut down the line size. Challenge is making it work. Happy Valentine's Day!