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Elfchen 

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Ship Sailing forward To unknown destination On life’s uncharted passage Embark

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




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Date: 1/26/2025 7:56:00 AM
Margaret, I appreciate your support for my Flash Poetry Challenge (8). Your poem was randomly chosen to be featured in my 'Results' blog, which is now up and running. I love the metaphor, and the brevity of the Elfchen form makes it even more impactful. A Fav for me.
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Margaret Foster
Date: 1/26/2025 8:02:00 AM
Thank you, Mark for your kind comments and your help and finding how to make the link cheers
Date: 1/22/2025 2:36:00 AM
- Skilled with few words ... love it, Margaret :) - hugs
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Margaret Foster
Date: 1/22/2025 3:57:00 AM
Thank you Anne-lise , it’s the first time I have tried this form, interesting. Cheers.
Date: 1/21/2025 9:02:00 PM
beautiful thought dear poet. so well written
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Margaret Foster
Date: 1/22/2025 3:54:00 AM
Many thanks for your charming comment. It is greatly appreciated.
Date: 1/20/2025 10:45:00 PM
Nice one and so true
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Margaret Foster
Date: 1/21/2025 12:59:00 AM
Many thanks, Oliver. I tried to put a picture on of a new baby but couldn’t work it out.Lol

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