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Elfchen 

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Ship

Ship
Sailing forward
To unknown destination
On life’s uncharted passage
Embark
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Toney Avatar
January 26, 2025 at 7:56 AM
Margaret, I appreciate your support for my Flash Poetry Challenge (8). Your poem was randomly chosen to be featured in my 'Results' blog, which is now up and running. I love the metaphor, and the brevity of the Elfchen form makes it even more impactful. A Fav for me.
Foster Avatar
January 26, 2025 at 8:02 AM
Thank you, Mark for your kind comments and your help and finding how to make the link cheers
Andresen Avatar
January 22, 2025 at 2:36 AM
- Skilled with few words ... love it, Margaret :) - hugs
Foster Avatar
January 22, 2025 at 3:57 AM
Thank you Anne-lise , it’s the first time I have tried this form, interesting. Cheers.
mysore Avatar
January 21, 2025 at 9:02 PM
beautiful thought dear poet. so well written
Foster Avatar
January 22, 2025 at 3:54 AM
Many thanks for your charming comment. It is greatly appreciated.
Mckeithan Avatar
January 20, 2025 at 10:45 PM
Nice one and so true
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January 21, 2025 at 12:59 AM
Many thanks, Oliver. I tried to put a picture on of a new baby but couldn’t work it out.Lol
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