Shiny Shiny

Kiss the rain
Tear me through

I awake today
I am pulled in again today
I loathe today
Is this lonesome?

Unmarked grave/ visions of an unmarked grave

Kiss the rain tear me through

I am jonesing  on the edge of your tin roof...
waiting, sweating, dying, crying,loving,living
 for something new


spade spiv spinning belle
Alone we lust
Alone we whisper
Alone Alone Alone is all I have
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Byrne Avatar
February 9, 2010 at 7:01 PM
Very Gothic!
Kendrick Avatar
February 5, 2010 at 5:25 PM
Interesting and sad write that you have persented here. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Brown Avatar
February 3, 2010 at 10:46 AM
It has been a pleasure to read your poem today Kalonji. Thank you so much for posting and sharing it with us. Love, Carol
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