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Shining Things

The birds are busy and the chipmunk play For them, it is a fun day Raindrops fall intermittently on leaves and ground Acorns bounce in the grass to be found Only a little yellow of autumn’s color has begun Still shining wet, without the sun Even on a dim day, shining things can be seen Like every caring gesture, that outweighs what’s mean Heidi Sands 10/4/21

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Date: 10/4/2021 7:51:00 PM
You are wonderful at finding the diamonds in the rough, Heidi. May it always be so! Light and Joy, Gershon
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/4/2021 8:52:00 PM
Thank you so much for your kindness and support Gershon.:)
Date: 10/4/2021 2:45:00 PM
Enjoyed the beauty of October in your imagery, Heidi--much more of the colors soon to follow.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/4/2021 3:09:00 PM
I am happy you enjoyed this Vijay. Yes, there will be so much color soon. Thank you :)
Date: 10/4/2021 2:22:00 PM
So much truth and beauty in your poem today my friend.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/4/2021 3:07:00 PM
Thank you so much Chris. I am happy to hear that :)
Date: 10/4/2021 1:37:00 PM
Even in the gloom of a dull day you'll find brightness, Hope you're well Heidi. Tom
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/4/2021 3:07:00 PM
Hi Tom. That is right. We can still find brightness. All is ok here, thanks. I hope you are well :)
Date: 10/4/2021 1:24:00 PM
Hello Heidi, yes even on a dull day shining things can be seen. Hugs.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/4/2021 4:20:00 PM
Hello Heidi, Your welcome Heidi. Hugs.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 10/4/2021 3:06:00 PM
Yes. Thank you Darlene. Hugs :)

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