Laura Breidenthal Poet Lyric

Shining Sun

new song/poem! :)
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I look outside my window
Watch the rain fall down like tears
Hoping that someday
 It’ll wash away my fears
But they never clear
They never go away
And they haunt me every single minute
Of every single day
Maybe someday 
This will all just turn to dust
I’ll just do what I need—
Just do what I must…
Without you
Without you
Here

Find it in your heart
To have a little care
Find it in your heart
To know that I am there
Find it in your heart
I know you think I’m strange
But find it in your heart
To believe that I can change
With you
With you
Here

I write this down in sadness
Wishing you can see
Knowing that none of it
Makes sense to you or me
And there’s nothing here
There’s nothing I can say
To make the clouds depart
And the icky mood to fade
I hope that someday 
When I am old and gray
I’ll just laugh a sigh and wonder:
What the hell was wrong with me?

Find it in your heart
To see me through the pane
Find it in your heart
To unchain me from this chain
Find me in your heart
I know that I am young
But find it in your heart
To make me someone
Forever—
And ever
Your shining sun

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire February 25, 2012 at 9:16 PM Dear Laura,The More I read, The more I LOVE YOUR POETRY Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments. LOVE YOU ALWAYS and FOREVER, YOUR Liege...Harry

Elijah Prophet January 28, 2012 at 6:16 PM Wow Laura tha's so intense and deep. You never cease to amaze me with your writing. Its so alive. I want to put it on a disk(CD) with your permission. Then send you the CD. Let me know.

Matthew Anish December 25, 2011 at 9:52 PM Sweet poem! Hope you are having a good holiday! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Nick Bagnall December 19, 2011 at 10:06 AM Beautiful emotions captured in here, a very pleasant read. I think pane should be pain unless it's a reference to the first verse, but I don't think it's supposed to be. Enjoyed the read Laura Breidenthal February 25, 2012 at 9:15 PM for* Laura Breidenthal December 19, 2011 at 1:21 PM I made it pane specifically fort the first verse, but it symbolizes pain. Thank you for the comments! (:

Maina Ndugo December 19, 2011 at 9:56 AM Real emotion, i like it

M. Hussain Effendi December 8, 2011 at 11:08 AM A touching write, Laura. I really loved this one, dear. Keep it up.