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Shining Star

I wished upon a shining star, way up high and very far. I wished that you were here with me, to sit on the sand by the sea. We could watch the waves crash on the shore, like we did many times before. With the moon glimmering bright, we made love by it's light. Grant my wish star so bright, bring my love to me this night. JSergi

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Date: 12/10/2013 3:28:00 PM
Hi Joseph, An awesome lyrical and romantic write.. Ken
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/10/2013 3:35:00 PM
Ken thanks for the post. and for stopping by
Date: 12/9/2013 8:53:00 PM
Thank you for calling me by my given name I appricate your wonderful work also. cheri
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/10/2013 3:36:00 PM
Not at all Cheri! Thank you for your thoughtful post
Date: 12/9/2013 8:48:00 PM
Bravo on this it is full of passion and emotion, loves unforgettible flame burns in your wondful lines. cheri and also thank you my dear friend for your wonderful comments on my work
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Joseph Sergi
Date: 12/10/2013 3:38:00 PM
WOW, what wonderful words. Thank you so much and it is always a pleasure to read you beautiful work

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