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Shining Pieces

An icicle smashed on the ground Pieces scattered everywhere I stopped in cold air, just to stare At the pattern that I had found A picture of my broken heart, From years ago came back to me Falling, just so that I could see The pieces still shined while apart Heidi Sands 2/7/21

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Quoth Theraven

Date: 3/23/2021 8:05:00 AM

Heidi, Icicle wonders, like short-lived stalactites in the caves of memory. Takes me back. 'Pieces scattered everywhere I stopped in cold air, just to stare At the pattern that I had found' They shined so well in your poem. -Richard

Heidi Sands
Date: 3/23/2021 1:31:00 PM

Interesting Richard. I enjoy reading your feedback. Thank you for the kind thoughtful comment :)

Sandra L. Weiss

Date: 2/25/2021 4:59:00 PM

Agreeing with Connie also, your talent is amazing. You write everything, beautifully and with such passion. Amazing Heidi!

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/26/2021 5:23:00 AM

Thank you very much Sandy. I appreciate your kind feedback !

Alexis Y.

Date: 2/8/2021 2:38:00 PM

Hi Heidi, I agree, with Connie. You've penned a good metaphor on a broken heart. The heart heals in it's own time. Great job:-)Alexis

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/26/2021 5:23:00 AM

Thank you Alexis :) I didn't notice this comment earlier. I apologize for the delay !

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/7/2021 8:21:00 PM

This poem relates a wonderful metaphor for a broken heart Heidi. Your talent always amazes me. I really enjoyed this emotional piece. I faved it! Blessings xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/8/2021 5:59:00 AM

Thank you so much for your kind comment and also the favorite Connie. I am grateful for your support. I hope all is well. :)

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 2/7/2021 4:51:00 PM

Hello Heidi … if there is icicles it is cold. I enjoy in your writing the way you observe around yourself Heidi - Lindsay

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/7/2021 8:11:00 PM

Yes, it has been cold lately. Thank you for your kind feedback. I hope all is well . Goodnight :)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 2/7/2021 3:35:00 PM

Love that last line Heidi.. The pieces still shined while apart. Wow. Panagiota

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/7/2021 3:45:00 PM

Thank you Panagiota :)