Heidi Sands Poet Enclosed Rhyme

Shining Pieces

An icicle smashed on the ground
Pieces scattered everywhere
I stopped in cold air, just to stare
At the pattern that I had found

A picture of my broken heart,
From years ago came back to me
Falling, just so that I could see
The pieces still shined while apart

Heidi Sands

2/7/21

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Quoth Theraven March 23, 2021 at 8:05 AM Heidi, Icicle wonders, like short-lived stalactites in the caves of memory. Takes me back. 'Pieces scattered everywhere I stopped in cold air, just to stare At the pattern that I had found' They shined so well in your poem. -Richard Heidi Sands March 23, 2021 at 1:31 PM Interesting Richard. I enjoy reading your feedback. Thank you for the kind thoughtful comment :)

Alexis Y. February 8, 2021 at 2:38 PM Hi Heidi, I agree, with Connie. You've penned a good metaphor on a broken heart. The heart heals in it's own time. Great job:-)Alexis Heidi Sands February 26, 2021 at 5:23 AM Thank you Alexis :) I didn't notice this comment earlier. I apologize for the delay !

Connie Marcum Wong February 7, 2021 at 8:21 PM This poem relates a wonderful metaphor for a broken heart Heidi. Your talent always amazes me. I really enjoyed this emotional piece. I faved it! Blessings xxoo Heidi Sands February 8, 2021 at 5:59 AM Thank you so much for your kind comment and also the favorite Connie. I am grateful for your support. I hope all is well. :)

Lindsay Laurie February 7, 2021 at 4:51 PM Hello Heidi … if there is icicles it is cold. I enjoy in your writing the way you observe around yourself Heidi - Lindsay Heidi Sands February 7, 2021 at 8:11 PM Yes, it has been cold lately. Thank you for your kind feedback. I hope all is well . Goodnight :)

Panagiota Romios February 7, 2021 at 3:35 PM Love that last line Heidi.. The pieces still shined while apart. Wow. Panagiota Heidi Sands February 7, 2021 at 3:45 PM Thank you Panagiota :)