Shining Light (Senryu)
lamp in a dark place
forward fight for forgiveness
salvation shining
© Joseph Spence, 7/21/07
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Comments: The traditional/classic Japanese senryu form has three lines: the
first five syllables, second seven syllables and third five syllables. The pattern is
5/7/5 for a total of seventeen syllables. The senryu is generally about an emotion
expression.
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