Shining Bright

The morning after the night before,
I feel your heat right down to the core,
Two bodies entwining, generating to one,
Your star is shining to the warmth of the sun,
And no one in the world can do what you do,
Out of the smallest of cracks you come shining through,
And brighten the day for all in the room,
Send your light my way and I´ll see you soon,
But if at any time you should lose the fight,
Just come to me and I´ll reignite,
Your spark in the dark, your light in the night,
Baby you´re a star keep on shining bright
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Agustin Avatar
July 8, 2025 at 8:58 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A  Avatar
January 27, 2016 at 2:00 PM
Hi LIAM, A great pleasure to find and read the inspiration poured from your pen today. Love ** SKAT -
Bagnall Avatar
February 2, 2010 at 5:41 AM
That's really well written, I look forward to you next poem
Sweetheart Avatar
January 31, 2010 at 3:11 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. please continue to share your creative writes with us all as this delight tonight.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
Hilliker Avatar
January 30, 2010 at 8:31 PM
Nicely written. I'm sure she loved it. Welcome to PoetrySoup.
Brown Avatar
January 30, 2010 at 2:47 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Liam. I also wish you the best in your writing endeavors. If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
Palli Avatar
January 30, 2010 at 11:40 AM
beautiful
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