Shine Like a Star

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“Exit oh hermit, dark pathways of sin ~ The light of a thousand suns shines within” ~ quote by poet We strive and spar, without knowing who we are and twirled by thoughts, we’ve drifted afar, whilst if we pause for a while free from ego’s guile, like yonder star and ponder upon our life style, though we’ve trudged many a mile, enslaved by mind, soul’s blackened like tar. We strive and spar, without knowing who we are. 19-January-2023

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/19/2023 9:33:00 AM

So far this contest has eluded me. You did a great job with this difficult form. Best for a win.

Unseeking Seeker
Date: 1/19/2023 5:10:00 PM

First time I’m using this interesting form ~ invented by Andrea. Deserves recognition but PS admins probably don’t want to stray from the well trodden conventional path.