Shine In Acid Rain

If the moon lights up the darkness
Let all scars be healed from pain
Let the stars shine in acid rain
I want to feel alive again

3rd place
When a fourth line helps it to rhyme
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 11:05 AM
I like this, Natasha. Pleasure to read one of your poems.
Turner Avatar
June 16, 2018 at 1:05 PM
Thanks Andrea :)
Roper Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 9:03 PM
Wonderful write, Natasha !:-) Congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve ~’*
Turner Avatar
June 14, 2018 at 10:53 PM
Thanks dear :)
Callus Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 1:46 PM
A delightful 4 liner with flowing rhymes. Congratulations on a fine podium finish, Natasha! Regards // paul
Turner Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 3:40 PM
Thanks Paul :)
Sands Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 7:36 AM
Congratulations for your win Natasha :)
Turner Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 7:38 AM
Hugs Heidi xxx
One Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 7:21 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Turner Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 7:31 AM
I'm so happy and glad you liked it. Thanks and hugs :)
Andresen Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 7:20 AM
- Congratulations on your little rhyme poem, Natasha :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Turner Avatar
June 13, 2018 at 7:31 AM
Thanks dear xxx
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