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Shine Brightly

 
sleep
the stars
shine brightly
to help guard the
night

wake
the sun
shines brightly
announcing the
day




March 8, 2019

daynightlanterne

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Abdullah Alhemaidy

October 19, 2019 at 3:15 PM

Great write and read!

P.S. Awtry

October 26, 2021 at 1:24 PM

thank you :)

Ann Gilmour

April 25, 2019 at 8:26 PM

A beautiful Lanterne PS. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

P.S. Awtry

April 25, 2019 at 9:16 PM

Thank you, Ann :). -ps

Anne-Lise Andresen

April 25, 2019 at 1:44 PM

- Beautifully written, P.S. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

P.S. Awtry

April 25, 2019 at 1:47 PM

thank you Anne-Lise :) ~ps

Timothy Mcguire

April 25, 2019 at 12:56 AM

Fabulous PS!

P.S. Awtry

April 25, 2019 at 8:16 AM

Thank you Timothy :) -ps

Demetrios Trifiatis

April 24, 2019 at 10:56 AM

Brilliant Lanterns dear, P.S. AWTRY!

P.S. Awtry

April 24, 2019 at 11:11 AM

Thank you Demetrios for your kind words! ~ps

Gershon Wolf

April 24, 2019 at 9:57 AM

...And He created the Moon and the Stars to guide them by night... Yours is a shining, poetic rendition of the account in Genesis, (even if not intended as such). Bravo, poet! :) gw

P.S. Awtry

April 24, 2019 at 10:27 AM

His meticulous design and providence awes and humbles me... Thank you so much for this compliment. ~ps