Shine

Give up the ghost
release the pain
free yourself from the chains
let go if the weight
 All that holds you down is you
trying to live as others
let go
their ideas are nothing
 Be yourself
fly
shine as bright as the sun
your life is the entertainment of others
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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February 24, 2009 at 9:21 AM
I like the flow of this poem and the message contained within, its good to release sorrow and past pains, I totally do it in my poetry as you saw, thank you for the comment on my work, keep them coming, Mark
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