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Shine

Give up the ghost release the pain free yourself from the chains let go if the weight All that holds you down is you trying to live as others let go their ideas are nothing Be yourself fly shine as bright as the sun your life is the entertainment of others

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/24/2009 9:21:00 AM
I like the flow of this poem and the message contained within, its good to release sorrow and past pains, I totally do it in my poetry as you saw, thank you for the comment on my work, keep them coming, Mark
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