Shimmer

Dark storm clouds shimmer.
Thunder and lightning advance.
Hear them crash and roar.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
December 2, 2009 at 9:38 AM
Very descriptive Haiku. I can see the scene and hear it. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Pickett Avatar
December 1, 2009 at 5:15 PM
A very visual Haiku, Wonderful...I did a follow up to your Silence... Hope you don't mind....RdP
Dufresne Avatar
December 1, 2009 at 4:07 PM
Cool Haiku , Daniel. Right on.
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