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Shimmer

Dark storm clouds shimmer. Thunder and lightning advance. Hear them crash and roar.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 12/2/2009 9:38:00 AM
Very descriptive Haiku. I can see the scene and hear it. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
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Date: 12/1/2009 5:15:00 PM
A very visual Haiku, Wonderful...I did a follow up to your Silence... Hope you don't mind....RdP
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Date: 12/1/2009 4:07:00 PM
Cool Haiku , Daniel. Right on.
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