Shifting Tides
SHIFTING TIDES
clouds intensify
crested by the dawn
in morning dew
where
freedom tolls
straight& true
then
vanishes
in the mist
til
the swelter of the sun
through the haze
is found
harboured there
held true
to still remain
in peaceful
vistas
through the ages
to consecrate
a watermark
& linger on
in rebirth
THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE without grammatical symbols the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respond thus making the form a two way interplay and often a unique interpretation by the enigma so derived
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