Annabelle Jane Poet Rhyme

She's Sure

She withdraws again
Her temperamental tide
Her wavering retreat
Her natural divide.

He must wait again
The patient one, he lies.
And all that she had sated
He slowly leaves to dry.

Both know she'll return
But she's sure she won't stay.
For Mother's hand dictates:
From the land, sea moves away.

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Keith Bickerstaffe July 9, 2012 at 3:56 PM Another unique and powerful theme... each verse, with your rhyming and cadence, is compelling... but your first verse is brilliant. Best wishes, Keith :))

Linda-Marie Sweetheart May 8, 2011 at 11:23 AM Enjoyed reading your very creative poetry tonight Annie.. great expression within each line.. hope u are enjoying this special day luv..

Danielle Wilkerson May 7, 2011 at 3:09 PM That was a ccol poem

Harley Quinn May 7, 2011 at 3:05 PM Awesome, truly awesome. Your poem is the breath of gods lungs. You hit it on the nail this time!