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She's Sure

She withdraws again Her temperamental tide Her wavering retreat Her natural divide. He must wait again The patient one, he lies. And all that she had sated He slowly leaves to dry. Both know she'll return But she's sure she won't stay. For Mother's hand dictates: From the land, sea moves away.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 7/9/2012 3:56:00 PM
Another unique and powerful theme... each verse, with your rhyming and cadence, is compelling... but your first verse is brilliant. Best wishes, Keith :))
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Date: 5/8/2011 11:23:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your very creative poetry tonight Annie.. great expression within each line.. hope u are enjoying this special day luv..
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Date: 5/7/2011 3:09:00 PM
That was a ccol poem
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Date: 5/7/2011 3:05:00 PM
Awesome, truly awesome. Your poem is the breath of gods lungs. You hit it on the nail this time!
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