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She's Still Mine

Unwavering love Never forgotten beauty Still going nowhere

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Dr Sarthak Sahoo

Date: 5/14/2009 3:14:00 AM

a state of solidity, where life desired fluidity? a moment of unambiguous truth you wanted... are you in a state of flux between denial and possibility? lets celebrate... even that which gives pain helps create that which showers pleasure... my tribute to your words my friend

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/6/2009 3:50:00 PM

Paul, I read this before, but didn't comment because, believe it or not, I was a bit confused. The line, "Still going nowhere" had dual meanings for me. I wasn't sure whether you meant that your love is still with you and is not physically leaving. Or does it mean that your love is unwavering, she left, but you never forgot her beauty, and since she left you, she's has not been successful in life. Please help me understand your words. Sometimes. Lovingly, Dane

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 4/24/2009 2:50:00 PM

wonderful haiku

Edward Orozco

Date: 4/24/2009 9:43:00 AM

Very touching, very talented you are! - darkpoet

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 4/24/2009 8:59:00 AM

Very beautiful haiku.