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She's Still Mine

Unwavering love
Never forgotten beauty
Still going nowhere

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Dr Sarthak Sahoo

May 14, 2009 at 3:14 AM

a state of solidity, where life desired fluidity? a moment of unambiguous truth you wanted... are you in a state of flux between denial and possibility? lets celebrate... even that which gives pain helps create that which showers pleasure... my tribute to your words my friend

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

May 6, 2009 at 3:50 PM

Paul, I read this before, but didn't comment because, believe it or not, I was a bit confused. The line, "Still going nowhere" had dual meanings for me. I wasn't sure whether you meant that your love is still with you and is not physically leaving. Or does it mean that your love is unwavering, she left, but you never forgot her beauty, and since she left you, she's has not been successful in life. Please help me understand your words. Sometimes. Lovingly, Dane