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She's Long Gone

She said she loved me Didn't take long for her to flee Somehow I didn't see That she will never miss me I was husband number nine Said she loved me all the time Now it all seems so funny She's long gone with all my money I finally learned my lesson when My best friend is now husband ten And I'll bet it wont take long Until she and his money are long gone But he won't listen to me That woman is all he can see He said this wasn't his first rodeo She can't fool him don't you know

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Date: 2/4/2020 4:24:00 PM
G'day Timothy … Can't fool him! He's already been fooled; oh well, it's only money - thanks Timothy - Lindsay
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 2/4/2020 7:58:00 PM
Love will blind a guy, I knew a guy once who tried to divorce his wife times. She would bankrupt him and then beg for forgiveness. he died penniless
Date: 2/1/2020 2:19:00 PM
I agree with the great rhyming in this. A story that surely should make people think :)
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Date: 1/29/2020 5:48:00 AM
As they say love is blind and you don't see until they're long gone. Tom
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 1/29/2020 2:05:00 PM
Along with the $$$$
Date: 1/29/2020 3:31:00 AM
beautiful loving poem penned; excellent rhyming
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 1/29/2020 2:06:00 PM
thank you Mahtab
Date: 1/29/2020 12:26:00 AM
Awesome rhyme, Timothy. Love your poem. Well penned.
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Timothy Mcguire
Date: 1/29/2020 2:06:00 PM
Thank you Miss Line

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