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Shes Givin Ma Blues

( form Blues stanza ) Ma baby core, be da one I adore her walk, talk, da way she look I adore rumble in ma gut, when she at da door, she say she a loves me, oh so sweet I tell her she like honey sweet as sweet her beauty, swept ma off ma dancin feet, da way she dress paid from her workin every day da no shirkin, just a workin do ma headin likin her how she tweakin, I thinkin to losin her ma heart would bruise lovin her right down to her amazin tattoos we’re so together man listnin to the blues. 3/23/2018

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/24/2018 8:07:00 AM

- A great poem ... a new form of me, too - But a wonderful read :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Roy Pett
Date: 3/24/2018 10:51:00 AM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment and best wishes Anne-Lise, I’m not sure that I have done the form justice but my family laughed when I read it out loud to them, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/23/2018 5:37:00 PM

Never heard of this form Roy, you've done it well. Good luck in the contest. Tom.

Roy Pett
Date: 3/23/2018 5:49:00 PM

Thanks Tom for your very kind comment and best wishes, this is the first time that I have attempted this form, if you would like to read some more that are much better than mine you can on the poets Garret site. thanks again for your support. :))