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Shes Givin Ma Blues

( form Blues stanza )



Ma baby core, be da one I adore
her walk, talk, da way she look I adore
rumble in ma gut, when she at da door,

she say she a loves me, oh so sweet
I tell her she like honey sweet as sweet
her beauty, swept ma off ma dancin feet,

da way she dress paid from her workin 
every day da no shirkin, just a workin
do ma headin likin her how she tweakin,

I thinkin to losin her ma heart would bruise 
lovin her right down to her amazin tattoos 
we’re so together man listnin to the blues. 

3/23/2018

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Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/24/2018 8:07:00 AM - A great poem ... a new form of me, too - But a wonderful read :) - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Roy Pett Date: 3/24/2018 10:51:00 AM Thank you so much for your very kind comment and best wishes Anne-Lise, I’m not sure that I have done the form justice but my family laughed when I read it out loud to them, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))

Tom Cunningham Date: 3/23/2018 5:37:00 PM Never heard of this form Roy, you've done it well. Good luck in the contest. Tom. Login to Reply Roy Pett Date: 3/23/2018 5:49:00 PM Thanks Tom for your very kind comment and best wishes, this is the first time that I have attempted this form, if you would like to read some more that are much better than mine you can on the poets Garret site. thanks again for your support. :))