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She's a Scientist

Being waiting for you.. 
since the day he planned of creating you.. 
watching you sleep the whole night , 
don't worry about me.. 
I'm sure you watching me sleep in your dream.. 
You're the disease for the present.. 
Cure for the past.. 
You don't know about your powers.. 
You're super natural.. 
One two and three.. 
Unlikely you then stopped to test me.. 
Been months since the first day.... 
Well,are you still testing..? 
Let me know.. 
There are others in line waiting.. 
"What's the result" 
They are tired of asking.. 
Not up to the mark is it ?? 
Then take a pin.. 
Pierce a hole right through this heart..let your self flow out.. 
Then take a red silky cloth 
tie it round my wrists.. 
Don't let the rest of you flow inside.. 
Or better just cut me into pieces.. 
throw me six feet under.. 
Don't then delay to cover up... 
Or the odour of my love might catch you up again to test me.. 
Succeeded?? 
Turn around.. 
Then first but now was the last one in line.. 
Don't worry.. 
Just don't panic... 
Your hearts still beating.. 
I'm there.. 
Don't be rapid.. 
You might just loose me inside..

Copyright © Arshad Ansari | Year Posted 2011

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 12/9/2011 6:50:00 AM Enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Arshad. Wishing you a beautiful weekend full of love and joy. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Gwendolen Song Date: 12/9/2011 5:13:00 AM you are hopelessly in love with this scientist girl, aren't you? I am fascinated how you don't mind if she experiments on YOU. This is fun stuff. Don't stop writing about these emotive topics. Chicks dig this stuff. ha ha. Best to you, new Souper. Enjoy the site. I am officially rolling out the red carpet just for you! Gwendolen Login to Reply

Grace Williams Date: 12/8/2011 4:43:00 PM Hello, I hope you are glad you joined poetry soup! It is fun! I don't understand your poem very much (except the general gist) but at second glance I really really like the last six lines. They make it interesting (if still unfathomable). Enjoy the rest of your day, and I hope to see more clever poems. Grace Login to Reply Arshad Ansari Date: 12/8/2011 5:01:00 PM the poem is basically about a guy who likes a girl..he at first praises her...for what she is and then he talks about how she is wanting to test him having no feelings like being a scientist...he says she could even kill him ifshe wants to if other things/tests dont work out.. Arshad Ansari Date: 12/8/2011 4:50:00 PM i appreciate your thoughts :) thank you :)