Shenendoah River

Well I've had a sleepless night or two
My baby's gone what am I gonna do?
Just a poor mans' son and plain to see
But my lord he looked good to me

Dark-sided moon got ahold of him
Took him for a midnight swim
Took his love and it took his life
Cut him from me like a cold steel knife

The Shenendoah waters,they roll so cold
And the sun burns down like a gamblers' gold
But the demon depths never made a sound
The night they took my baby down

Shenendoah River's beautiful to see
But the heartless river took him from me
Now my baby's gone what am I gonna do?
Shenendoah cut my heart in two

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 9/9/2010 5:37:00 PM
LIke Sara said, I hope this was just in fun and not a true story! I really enjoyed it. It was kind of like a ballad. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 9/9/2010 3:07:00 PM
Sad write ...I hope just a write on a topic and not a genuine loss in your life..Enjoyed reading your talented work..I am honored to have your stop by, read, and comment on my work..Sara
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Date: 9/9/2010 2:35:00 PM
This would be a wonderful song and it had a musical essence to it. An excellent write. Thank you for your comments on my poem. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 9/9/2010 11:14:00 AM
Your poems have a musical essence. I can take a guitar and roll with it.
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