Shelter

Been sitting here watching life pass me by. Maybe I should get shelter from all this rain. How do I get you off my mind, this time? You brought me to life with all your love. The likeness of you flows thru me like a butterfly. I smell your scent in the air I breathe. For it is unto you I become whole in this life. Everything makes sense when I'm with you. Another old one 2/14/ 1999 Sun.

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Funom Makama

Date: 7/12/2017 10:02:00 AM

Excellent and profound. You have that unique skill of beating the peak. This is a wonderful stuff, always beating our expectation. Can wait to jump to your next page.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 6/29/2017 4:09:00 AM

Debbie, I did see this before. You make connections to all the senses and the relationship among your creative ideas is absolutely thrilling.

Maria Williams

Date: 6/21/2017 3:26:00 AM

Beautifully expressed Debbie- You brought me to life with all your love,,Love that line...Maria

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/21/2017 12:43:00 AM

Debbie, no, I don't use crystals but I would love to try them! I did use a needle hanging from a string over my belly when I was pregnant and it was correct on the baby's sex! (the string either goes back and forth or goes in a circular motion) Please keep me up on any new poems you post and thanks for reading so many of mine

Eve Roper

Date: 6/19/2017 8:47:00 PM

Enjoyed, Debbie,thank you for your visit ~*

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 6/19/2017 8:14:00 PM

Beautifully penned poem about being in love! Enjoyed!~Che :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/19/2017 5:42:00 PM

I sure like seeing this oldie because it's a goodie!! 1999, huh? REmember dear Prince and party like it's 1999. Wish I was back in that year. It was a really good year as I recall, and I was so YOUNG LOOKING! Let me see if there is at least one other poem up that I have not viewed yet! Oh, and before I forget. I am glad you got the owl. I was hoping for the owl myself and then got a dang turtle. hahaha (I'm not even slow)

Ralph Sergi

Date: 6/19/2017 1:46:00 PM

Beautiful poem, Debbie: It is nice to have someone to shelter you from the rain.

Freddie Robinson Jr.

Date: 6/19/2017 1:13:00 PM

Elegantly expressed emotions, Debbie. Your heart speaks through your pen. A most alluring voice, dear lady. May love light your path always.

Bl Devnath

Date: 6/18/2017 10:50:00 AM

Beautiful shelter of life beautifully expressed my lovely dear friend. Loved always, bl

Duke Beaufort

Date: 6/18/2017 10:28:00 AM

Another beautiful piece of expression. Life is rain when we're immersed in its struggles.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/18/2017 7:13:00 AM

Great love expressed in a few short lines..Enjoyed reading your work..Thanks for the many stops by my page..Sara