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Shelter

I like your name It’s pleasing to say A passion aflame Concealed by your way Incredibly tranquil You sit very still Makes me feel peaceful Gives me a thrill You turn your head slowly And take it all in My reluctant fancy Of what lies within Dark circles below Deep ocean above My desire to know Your reception of love Twinkle at twilight Post heat of the day A whisper of I might Your tantalizing sway Little black dress Clings to your skin Sweat and caress Before we begin Inferno inside me The love of my life To shelter I flee Rush home to my wife

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/19/2016 2:42:00 PM
Jeff Eaton, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT*8
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Date: 7/27/2010 12:45:00 PM
Welcome to the soup. I really enjoyed this poem and look forward to reading more of your work. So feed me
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Date: 7/27/2010 10:34:00 AM
very passionate good work,read some of my work about love and lust lies and trust
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Date: 7/13/2010 12:56:00 PM
What a blessing we have in PoetrySoup. A place to come to write and read and make new friends along the ink trail. I am wishing you a day full of inspiration. I enjoyed reading your poetry today and hope to read many more written by you in the future Jeff. Welcome aboard. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/13/2010 11:26:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your very creative write tonight.. with luv..
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