Sheetal

When i first laid my eyes upon you
You looked so tender and fair
With your deep amber eyes
and your jet black hair
when you spoke the angels sang
and i knew from that moment
i would love you until the earth no longer span

With legs so long and skin so soft
And after our first kiss 
My mind was lost
No one has ever looked so good as you my queen

So now i have said my piece
And im glad your happy
Glad your soul fly's free
but i just want too say
my love for you will always be
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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June 13, 2010 at 8:57 AM
Congratulations on being featured. Great job! Joseph
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June 12, 2010 at 11:24 AM
Hey! Congrats on having you wonderful poem being featured this week, keep your pens flowing with passion. You are such a great writer
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June 9, 2010 at 11:42 AM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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June 7, 2010 at 7:50 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved featured poetry this week Cameron. Love, Carol
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June 6, 2010 at 6:17 PM
Nice tribute to your love. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Wishing you continued success with your writing. Karen
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