Shedding of Winter (Kimo)

(Welcoming Spring)

Clear ribbons of icicles, now melting;
Shed as refreshing teardrops,
From the old oak trees limbs
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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December 17, 2008 at 1:41 PM
Beautiful use of imagery in this poem. With temps below zero as of late, I'm ready for the "Shedding of Winter." You paint a picture with words here. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind words regarding my poem. Merry Christmas! Karen
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July 29, 2008 at 9:59 AM
Wow, beautiful imagery and depth. I loved this depiction. Regards, Sara:)
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