She Would Reinvent and Fix Him

He was a sapless namby-pamby
but my cousin loved the idea that he was a blank canvas
She had taken other canvases and turned them into Pollocks and Rembrandts
Or so she thought…..

She would paint him in vibrant colors.
She would use a variety of her carefully honed and tested techniques
She bought a bunch of new brushes and paints.
Ready to begin her creation!

She spent years and years
Perfecting her craft, only it did not comply as she had surmised it should.
She spent all that time trying to change a rabbit into the Easter Bunny.

He finally hopped away.
Showing spunkiness and spirit
for the first time since they met.
Not to be outdone, she took the credit for it.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Krutsinger Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 5:55 AM
Why would the word SPunk be considered a bad word? Why would it be replaced with STARS?
Krutsinger Avatar
September 15, 2021 at 1:23 PM
Thank you Hank. I had absolutely NO idea!
Hankins Avatar
September 15, 2021 at 8:51 AM
Well, well...the moralists are at it again, I suppose. Caren, "spunk" is a slang word for semen. There, I told you.
Hawkins Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 12:20 AM
He finally hopped away, he got fed up with her rabbiting on...
Krutsinger Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 5:55 AM
They always move on....
Hankins Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 8:38 PM
Somehow I felt this wasn't going to be a happy ending. I feel sorry for the guy, having married a woman determined to change him.
Krutsinger Avatar
September 14, 2021 at 5:56 AM
I would never marry this one either. I change all the time, and my husband knows he better keep up.
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