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She Who Must Be Obeyed

My wife said she would die first, I must wait my turn,
she who must be obeyed now rests in a ceramic urn.




7/22/2018

deathgriefwifeepigram

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Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 7/23/2018 3:16:00 PM

Hahahaha - this is utterly clever and hilarious! What an enjoyable read and a fave! I am sure it will do well in the contest! Best wishes and hugs. Pandita

Roy Pett
Date: 7/23/2018 4:51:00 PM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment and best wishes, so pleased you liked my epigram, I am honoured that you believe this is worthy to be added to your favourites, thanks again for your support my dear friend. :))

Arturo Michael

Date: 7/23/2018 1:14:00 PM

The boss is the boss...what can you say...surely you'll be seeing her again...All the best Roy...

Roy Pett
Date: 7/23/2018 3:00:00 PM

Thanks Arturo, we don’t say anything just nod in the right places lol, thanks again for your support much appreciated my friend. :))

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/23/2018 8:51:00 AM

Nicely done Roy...careful when you sneeze...best of luck...^WW^

Roy Pett
Date: 7/23/2018 9:28:00 AM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment and best wishes WW, I will be very careful, thanks again for your support much appreciated. :))

Charles Messina

Date: 7/23/2018 7:10:00 AM

LOL, Love this Roy...Best of luck in the contest.!

Roy Pett
Date: 7/23/2018 7:19:00 AM

Thank you so much for your very kind comment and best wishes Charles much appreciated my friend. :))

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/23/2018 7:07:00 AM

Yes--wife must be obeyed! Very clever indeed..best for a win, Roy.

Roy Pett
Date: 7/23/2018 7:18:00 AM

Thank you so much for your best wishes and very kind comment Vijay much appreciated my friend. :))

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/22/2018 9:52:00 PM

Oh Roy, a keen-edged witty dark beauty! I love it, exceptional and a fav! Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan

Roy Pett
Date: 7/23/2018 4:48:00 AM

Wow Susan, I can’t express how happy I am to receive your very kind comment and best wishes, I feel honoured that you think this worthy to be added to your favourites, thanks again for your support and encouragement much appreciated. :))))

Daniel Turner

Date: 7/22/2018 8:30:00 PM

Roy, I'm not sure I'd want that funky looking urn staring at me all day. I do appreciate the dark humor:) Good luck!

Roy Pett
Date: 7/23/2018 4:37:00 AM

Thanks Daniel, I’m sure it’s not everyone’s cup of tea but it has character lol, thanks again for your support and best wishes much appreciated. :))