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She Was Gone

Her eyes were blue Her flaws were few As she lay with her head on my pillow The day was lost 'Til our paths crossed In the sandy streets of Amarillo I took a chance Asked her to dance In a honky tonk just outside of town We danced to swing When it was king In this old roadhouse where they love the sound We made a plan To meet again On the full moon 'neath the weepimg willow But came the dawn And she was gone - I wait 'neath a tree in Amarillo 5/11/2017 For contest Easy by Skat A

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Date: 1/9/2018 10:03:00 PM
A pleasure to read. Congrats on your win, Larry.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 1/9/2018 10:12:00 PM
Thank you for your kind comments..Larry
Date: 1/9/2018 7:46:00 AM
great rhythm and flow dear Larry, congrats :) -luloo
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 1/9/2018 10:11:00 PM
Thank you, Laura!
Date: 1/8/2018 10:58:00 PM
Great write, Larry,congratulations on your win.
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 1/8/2018 11:03:00 PM
Thank you, Eve!!
Date: 1/8/2018 10:05:00 AM
Larry, Congratulations on your win. HUGS ~SKAT~
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 1/8/2018 11:02:00 PM
Thank you, Scat!

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