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She Threw It Away

he gave her his life so very glad that he could... she threw it away Written: 7-14-2019 Contest: Greed Lust or Loss Sponsor: Tania Kitchin www.syllablecounter.net

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Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/18/2019 9:37:00 AM

Congrats, my friend Panagiota

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/19/2019 1:30:00 AM

Thank you so much Panagiota. I appreciate it.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/16/2019 6:06:00 PM

It happens so often to good people . a sad situation well portrayed. Congrats, Caren

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/17/2019 6:13:00 AM

Thank you Andrea. I was trying to include all three - lust, loss and greed. Ha!

Jeanne Mcgee

Date: 7/16/2019 12:14:00 AM

The picture your words paint are sad indeed. Congrats on a deserved win.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/17/2019 6:14:00 AM

Thank you Jeanne. This one was re-written many times, which is odd for so few words.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/15/2019 9:34:00 PM

Congrats on your win in the contest, Caren. This senryu slays me. Impactful. ~ gw

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/15/2019 11:59:00 PM

I see that you met her then. Ha! Right.

Debjani Mitra

Date: 7/15/2019 9:33:00 PM

This is so direct, but hits the heart.. Congrats Caren

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/15/2019 11:59:00 PM

Thank you so much Debjani. I appreciate your stopping by.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/15/2019 7:18:00 PM

Well done! Congratulations, Caren!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/15/2019 11:59:00 PM

Thank you so much Kim.

Kurt Ravidas

Date: 7/15/2019 7:07:00 PM

I bet she'd never throw away the silver you won) Congrats, Caren.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/16/2019 12:00:00 AM

She never would throw it away, but she would steal it away in the night and not leave anything for the other guy.

Tania Kitchin

Date: 7/15/2019 6:46:00 PM

Caren, congratulations on your winning placement in the contest, loved the twist at the end!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 7/16/2019 12:00:00 AM

Thank you so much. I kept thinking "will this make sense to Tania?" I am so glad it did!