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Caren Krutsinger

She Threw It Away

he gave her his life
so very glad that he could...
she threw it away


Written: 7-14-2019 		Contest:  Greed Lust or Loss
Sponsor: Tania Kitchin        www.syllablecounter.net

Copyright © Caren Krutsinger | Year Posted 2019

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Panagiota Romios

July 18, 2019 at 9:37 AM

Congrats, my friend Panagiota

Caren Krutsinger

July 19, 2019 at 1:30 AM

Thank you so much Panagiota. I appreciate it.

Andrea Dietrich

July 16, 2019 at 6:06 PM

It happens so often to good people . a sad situation well portrayed. Congrats, Caren

Caren Krutsinger

July 17, 2019 at 6:13 AM

Thank you Andrea. I was trying to include all three - lust, loss and greed. Ha!

July 16, 2019 at 12:14 AM

The picture your words paint are sad indeed. Congrats on a deserved win.

Caren Krutsinger

July 17, 2019 at 6:14 AM

Thank you Jeanne. This one was re-written many times, which is odd for so few words.

July 15, 2019 at 9:34 PM

Congrats on your win in the contest, Caren. This senryu slays me. Impactful. ~ gw

Caren Krutsinger

July 15, 2019 at 11:59 PM

I see that you met her then. Ha! Right.

July 15, 2019 at 9:33 PM

This is so direct, but hits the heart.. Congrats Caren

Caren Krutsinger

July 15, 2019 at 11:59 PM

Thank you so much Debjani. I appreciate your stopping by.

July 15, 2019 at 7:18 PM

Well done! Congratulations, Caren!

Caren Krutsinger

July 15, 2019 at 11:59 PM

Thank you so much Kim.

July 15, 2019 at 7:07 PM

I bet she'd never throw away the silver you won) Congrats, Caren.

Caren Krutsinger

July 16, 2019 at 12:00 AM

She never would throw it away, but she would steal it away in the night and not leave anything for the other guy.

July 15, 2019 at 6:46 PM

Caren, congratulations on your winning placement in the contest, loved the twist at the end!

Caren Krutsinger

July 16, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Thank you so much. I kept thinking "will this make sense to Tania?" I am so glad it did!

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