She That Will Come (2)

The sky will lower, the hills quieten,
and the moonlight to my window sill come,
the night she will come.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
December 20, 2009 at 6:39 AM
Very impressive write. Keep the creative pen flowing. Sara
Itticheria Avatar
October 12, 2009 at 9:11 PM
Fantastic imagery,very nicely written.The moon will give you enough light .Good luck. Best wishes Chacko
Chircop Avatar
September 12, 2009 at 5:15 AM
wow this goes to my favs..indeed a gem--Charma
Bloomsfield Avatar
September 11, 2009 at 4:23 AM
in the night she will come as sunrise to your dark,you re agood writer-Celina
Kendrick Avatar
September 2, 2009 at 4:26 PM
Nicely descriptive. Sara
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September 2, 2009 at 3:42 PM
Nice use of imagery for a creative view. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind comment. Keep on writing! Karen
Culverhouse Avatar
September 2, 2009 at 3:31 PM
Sweet dusk, is a surety
Moreno Avatar
September 2, 2009 at 3:14 PM
Lovely haiku KK
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