She That Embraced the Darkness In Her Veins

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Robert J. Lindley, 8-02-2018
Rhyme, (Dark Oft Invades Broken Hearts)

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Note- The muse said, when darkness invades and the heart saddens and sinks
write words from malevolent parades and pour us both much stiffer drinks!

She That Embraced The Darkness In Her Veins

With her mind not sick of dark devious games
she opens dead doors, tossing in more painful blames
in newly acquired realm, no mercy was real
as darkness ate away, weeping heart to steal.
She planted her black roses, her favorite crop
Embracing hate masters, never going to stop.

As her heart transformed to stone, sky fell away
nights holding no moons and bright stars, only grey
listening for wolves to howl and night owls hoot
she pondered life and how deep her ancient roots.
Garden wide, its radiant color darkest black
She counted her evil chips, in multiple stacks.

With heartache's deadliest weapon, she spared none
as souls shattered, she would cry out, this is fun
in heralded glory, she lit bigger fires
lustily craving hotter funeral pyres.
When nights got boring, her satanic eyes would blaze
Out into waiting wild world, all hell she would raise.

Robert J. Lindley, 8-02-2018
Rhyme, (Dark Oft Invades Broken Hearts)

Note- The muse said, when darkness invades and the heart saddens and sinks
write words from malevolent parades and pour us both much stiffer drinks!

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Date: 8/3/2018 9:17:00 AM
Hell hath no fury like a broken-hearted she-devil! A deep, dark and completely captivating poem dear Robert. Every poetic line is enlivened by your intense and black-hearted imagery steeped in evil emotions. Your poetic talent shines in this fantastic gem and a fav! Warmest wishes my wonderful friend.. ~Susan
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/4/2018 1:38:00 PM
Thank you my dear friend. I am very pleased that you saw the depth, truth and benefit in this dark piece. As this savage world has more dark than light. And such should also be written about, IMHO. Thanks for the fav....
Date: 8/3/2018 12:12:00 AM
God ! Absolutely smashing piece, this, very intense, and brilliantly worded.
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Date: 8/4/2018 1:34:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Appreciate your kind comment.
Date: 8/2/2018 8:25:00 PM
Are you sure your not talking about my ex with this brilliant write? Excellent poetry, Robert! Good Stuff indeed...Charlie BTW, great collaboration with Susan again! Loved it...All the Best, Charlie
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/4/2018 1:33:00 PM
Thank you my friend. I think not but a lot of my two ex-wives are reflected in this poem..
Date: 8/2/2018 5:23:00 PM
andt' this write be of a tale told before the fire at the old-ale tavern and bar.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 8/4/2018 1:32:00 PM
Thank you my friend. That it tis, that it tis my friend.
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