She Says: Verse 1

She says "You don't know me."
But I don't think it's true,
I've always tried to see,
And I've more than a clue,

She says "Well, then prove it."
So I try to my best,
But when she tells me I'm wrong,
It's like a stake through my chest,

She says "You don't care."
I just don't understand,
I really do care,
I can't just disband,

She says "You don't know me."
But I hope that she's wrong,
Perhaps I do know her,
Perhaps I have all along.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Guzzi Avatar
October 21, 2009 at 9:24 AM
If it's not working..it's not working...no ones fault. Light & Love
Kendrick Avatar
October 1, 2009 at 12:44 PM
Interesting idea here. Keep writing. Sara
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October 1, 2009 at 12:38 PM
wonderfull write.
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