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She Says: Verse 1

She says "You don't know me." But I don't think it's true, I've always tried to see, And I've more than a clue, She says "Well, then prove it." So I try to my best, But when she tells me I'm wrong, It's like a stake through my chest, She says "You don't care." I just don't understand, I really do care, I can't just disband, She says "You don't know me." But I hope that she's wrong, Perhaps I do know her, Perhaps I have all along.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 10/21/2009 9:24:00 AM
If it's not working..it's not working...no ones fault. Light & Love
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Date: 10/1/2009 12:44:00 PM
Interesting idea here. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/1/2009 12:38:00 PM
wonderfull write.
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Book: Shattered Sighs