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She Saw It But

An angel came down and gave her a wink. Astounded she did not know what to think She saw it but she did not believe A voice came clearly into her sleep mind In her sleep state her Daddy she did find She saw it but she did not believe Are you going crazy? Are you quite mad? Asked the apparition that was her dad. She saw it but she did not believe Eyes popped open and her heart beat wild Dad was there. He said I love you child. She saw it but she did not believe But he could see that he had scared her now He disappeared with a tiny sad bow She saw it but she did not believe She had just had a visitation dream As smooth as silk and as tasty as cream She saw it but she did not believe

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Pratap Roy

Date: 12/11/2019 6:21:00 PM

So nicely written, Caren. Use of the refrain was too good. God bless you.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/12/2019 2:13:00 AM

Thank you Pratap. This was a new "try" for a style.

Sandra Adams

Date: 12/10/2019 8:25:00 PM

wonderfully penned, i am not familiar with the form but the poem had a great rhythm to it...i have had people visit my dreams and it's like stepping out of your dreams to be with them for awhile...so vivid...

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/10/2019 11:30:00 PM

It is called a visitation dream, and it happens when people are grieving.

Brenda Chiri

Date: 12/10/2019 5:16:00 PM

This was such a great poem my dear Iowan friend!;) you rocked it!;)

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/10/2019 11:30:00 PM

Thank you Brenda. I will take a tiny bow

M. L. Kiser

Date: 12/10/2019 3:19:00 PM

This has quite a rhythmic feel. Too often we don't believe what we see. Well done.

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/10/2019 11:31:00 PM

I know it happens all the time.

Robertina B.

Date: 12/10/2019 11:21:00 AM

I absolutely enjoyed your write, Caren.. Flowed beautifully and so adorable how you penned it.. Brava!! Your talent shines, my friend.. Have a blessed day!!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 12/10/2019 12:10:00 PM

Thank you ever so much Robertina.