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She Loves Me

She loves me, she loves me not,

white petals flew away to rot.

Springs love blossoming grows.

Commitment made while passions burned,

missing lover, lesson learned.

A promise gone, as the wind blows.




Christopher Bunton

For the "petals in the wind" contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 2/3/2013 6:49:00 PM
I love the way you took yours and made it about love and emotion. VERY nice, and congrats in the contest.
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 2/10/2013 9:49:00 PM
Thank you!!
Date: 2/3/2013 5:16:00 PM
Unique way to go in the contest..Congrats on your win..Sara
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 2/10/2013 9:49:00 PM
Thank You!!
Date: 2/3/2013 1:07:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning spot Christopher xx
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 2/10/2013 9:49:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 2/1/2013 9:26:00 AM
I like your take on the theme...though it has a sad tone to it, it is well done. Ohhh the petals I pulled in my youth...memories of sweeter times and a tender heart making wishes of He loves me, He loves me not... Enjoyed and happy to see this on the winning list. Congrats !!
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 2/2/2013 6:42:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 1/31/2013 9:15:00 PM
Christopher, wow...wow..! This is like my 8 ball.. I shook it ans asked it time and time again.. If he loved me... Yes, a lesson learned. I like how you took your poem to another level..., . Congratulations :-) In Gail's "Petals In The Wind " contest. Always~ PD
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 2/2/2013 6:44:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 1/31/2013 2:47:00 PM
Congratulations, Christopher. Su
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 2/2/2013 6:44:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 1/21/2013 4:45:00 PM
this is awesome!! But I believe she asks for a minimum of 12 lines. Go check it out. I could be wrong, but I want you to win this!!!
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 1/23/2013 4:02:00 PM
LOL! You had me worried. It say "1-12 placements" Which I think means winners. Thank you.
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 1/23/2013 4:02:00 PM
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Date: 1/21/2013 11:44:00 AM
Its true..sad poems are the most beautiful..lovely
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 1/21/2013 3:26:00 PM
Thank you!
Date: 1/20/2013 3:55:00 AM
a sad life lesson we all learn... "Commitment made while passions burned, missing lover, lesson learned" good lines.. nice write
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 1/20/2013 12:23:00 PM
Thank You!! :)
Date: 1/19/2013 4:29:00 PM
A sad poem .... - Luck in contest Christopher - Big hug / / Anne-Lise :)
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Christopher Bunton
Date: 1/20/2013 12:23:00 PM
Thank You! :)