Christopher Bunton Poet Tail-rhyme

She Loves Me

She loves me, she loves me not,

white petals flew away to rot.

Springs love blossoming grows.

Commitment made while passions burned,

missing lover, lesson learned.

A promise gone, as the wind blows.




Christopher Bunton

For the "petals in the wind" contest

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Andrea Dietrich February 3, 2013 at 6:49 PM I love the way you took yours and made it about love and emotion. VERY nice, and congrats in the contest. Christopher Bunton February 10, 2013 at 9:49 PM Thank you!!

Sara Kendrick February 3, 2013 at 5:16 PM Unique way to go in the contest..Congrats on your win..Sara Christopher Bunton February 10, 2013 at 9:49 PM Thank You!!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl February 3, 2013 at 1:07 PM Congratulations on your winning spot Christopher xx Christopher Bunton February 10, 2013 at 9:49 PM Thank you!

Debra Squyres February 1, 2013 at 9:26 AM I like your take on the theme...though it has a sad tone to it, it is well done. Ohhh the petals I pulled in my youth...memories of sweeter times and a tender heart making wishes of He loves me, He loves me not... Enjoyed and happy to see this on the winning list. Congrats !! Christopher Bunton February 2, 2013 at 6:42 AM Thank you!

Poet Destroyer A January 31, 2013 at 9:15 PM Christopher, wow...wow..! This is like my 8 ball.. I shook it ans asked it time and time again.. If he loved me... Yes, a lesson learned. I like how you took your poem to another level..., . Congratulations :-) In Gail's "Petals In The Wind " contest. Always~ PD Christopher Bunton February 2, 2013 at 6:44 AM Thank you!

Andrea Dietrich January 21, 2013 at 4:45 PM this is awesome!! But I believe she asks for a minimum of 12 lines. Go check it out. I could be wrong, but I want you to win this!!! Christopher Bunton January 23, 2013 at 4:02 PM LOL! You had me worried. It say "1-12 placements" Which I think means winners. Thank you. Christopher Bunton January 23, 2013 at 4:02 PM Says <<<<< Correction

Charmaine Chircop January 21, 2013 at 11:44 AM Its true..sad poems are the most beautiful..lovely Christopher Bunton January 21, 2013 at 3:26 PM Thank you!

Victoria Anderson-Throop January 20, 2013 at 3:55 AM a sad life lesson we all learn... "Commitment made while passions burned, missing lover, lesson learned" good lines.. nice write Christopher Bunton January 20, 2013 at 12:23 PM Thank You!! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen January 19, 2013 at 4:29 PM A sad poem .... - Luck in contest Christopher - Big hug / / Anne-Lise :) Christopher Bunton January 20, 2013 at 12:23 PM Thank You! :)