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She Loves Me

She loves me, she loves me not, white petals flew away to rot. Springs love blossoming grows. Commitment made while passions burned, missing lover, lesson learned. A promise gone, as the wind blows. Christopher Bunton For the "petals in the wind" contest

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/3/2013 6:49:00 PM

I love the way you took yours and made it about love and emotion. VERY nice, and congrats in the contest.

Christopher Bunton
Date: 2/10/2013 9:49:00 PM

Thank you!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/3/2013 5:16:00 PM

Unique way to go in the contest..Congrats on your win..Sara

Christopher Bunton
Date: 2/10/2013 9:49:00 PM

Thank You!!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 2/3/2013 1:07:00 PM

Congratulations on your winning spot Christopher xx

Christopher Bunton
Date: 2/10/2013 9:49:00 PM

Thank you!

Debra Squyres

Date: 2/1/2013 9:26:00 AM

I like your take on the theme...though it has a sad tone to it, it is well done. Ohhh the petals I pulled in my youth...memories of sweeter times and a tender heart making wishes of He loves me, He loves me not... Enjoyed and happy to see this on the winning list. Congrats !!

Christopher Bunton
Date: 2/2/2013 6:42:00 AM

Thank you!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/31/2013 9:15:00 PM

Christopher, wow...wow..! This is like my 8 ball.. I shook it ans asked it time and time again.. If he loved me... Yes, a lesson learned. I like how you took your poem to another level..., . Congratulations :-) In Gail's "Petals In The Wind " contest. Always~ PD

Christopher Bunton
Date: 2/2/2013 6:44:00 AM

Thank you!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/21/2013 4:45:00 PM

this is awesome!! But I believe she asks for a minimum of 12 lines. Go check it out. I could be wrong, but I want you to win this!!!

Christopher Bunton
Date: 1/23/2013 4:02:00 PM

LOL! You had me worried. It say "1-12 placements" Which I think means winners. Thank you.

Christopher Bunton
Date: 1/23/2013 4:02:00 PM

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