She Loved Cardinals

As I walked through the corridor of my mansion
To the far side in which my parents room was before they had passed,
I felt like I was being drawn into that area for some odd reason
My parents room has been left alone and still set up the same way it was before momma passed 
I rarely enter the room because I cry every time I do 
The only reason I entered this time was because the door was ajar 
When I approached the door to push it open, before I could... 
A breeze came through from the bedroom window and swung it open 
I don't know why or even how the window was opened, it's been shut for years 
I took two steps into the room when suddenly... 
A cardinal flew onto the window sill 
Chills ran through my veins and down my spine 
My mother, momma...she loved cardinals 
Again...I cried
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Ruwindi Avatar
June 23, 2019 at 11:42 AM
So beautiful and so sad, I think I felt the way you wanted me to feel...,
Ashley Avatar
June 16, 2019 at 9:17 PM
The essence of a beloved Mother never dies and her inspiration lives on within and around us, reminding us with loving gestures of her everlasting devotion.. Charlie, your beautiful poem truly moves me. My beloved Mom shows me she's still with me too. You write with exquisite emotion that reaches deeply into my heart. Warmest wishes always, my charming friend.. ~Susan
Roper Avatar
June 16, 2019 at 9:01 PM
Beautiful sad poem, Charles. Hugs Eve
Romios Avatar
June 16, 2019 at 4:17 PM
Truly touching, Charlie Panagiota xx
Messina Avatar
June 16, 2019 at 6:33 PM
Thank you, Panagiota. xx
Duet Avatar
June 16, 2019 at 4:01 PM
P.S. Faved and *soupmail
Messina Avatar
June 16, 2019 at 6:34 PM
Thank you so much for faving this and for the SM xx
Duet Avatar
June 16, 2019 at 3:57 PM
I love this, Charles. It really reminds me of my mother who loved cardinals too. All of her Christmas cards always had a cardinal in the snow on them and out of the blue recently my little grandson painted a picture with a cardinal in the snow on it. Weird...
Messina Avatar
June 16, 2019 at 6:36 PM
That's lovely Carole...Not weird though..she was thinking of you :)
Onclaud Avatar
June 16, 2019 at 2:50 PM
ohh, this is touching and so well crafted, charles; nothing like having a mother!... much enjoyed!..huggs
Messina Avatar
June 16, 2019 at 6:38 PM
Thank you, Nette. True, nothing like having a mother :) Huggs xx
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