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She lost enterest

She is here with me but her mind miles and miles away sleep walks Sleep Talks Where is she? She is in a journey to far for return Too far for rumours to reach How could she be so far? SHE LOST ENTEREST

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 4/8/2013 8:04:00 AM
So close, so far away. A painful feeling. "Sleep Talks", indeed. Excellent job!
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Patrick Nigros
Date: 4/9/2013 10:18:00 PM
Thank you DRAKE