She Is Brighter Than Dawn

She is brighter than dawn
by Michael R. Burch

for Beth

There’s a light about her
like the moon through a mist:
a starry candescence
with which she is blessed

and my heart to her light
like the tide now is pulled ...
she is fair, O, and bright
like the moon silver-veiled.

There’s a fire within her
like the sun’s leaping forth
to lap up the darkness
of night from earth's hearth

and my eyes to her flame
like twin moths now are drawn
till my heart is consumed.
She is brighter than dawn.

Keywords/Tags: Meter, Rhyme, Traditional, Formal, Quatrains, Love, Light, Dawn, Moon, Stars, Heart, Tide, Fair, Bright, Fire, Sun, Dark, Darkness, Night, Hearth, Flame, Moth, Moths
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Dream  Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 5:08 AM
Wow stunning visionary in your words!
Burch Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 6:12 AM
Thanks, I'm glad you think so!
Buehler Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 12:11 AM
Very beautiful, Michael, and so romantic!
Burch Avatar
February 25, 2020 at 4:39 AM
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!
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