Get Your Premium Membership

She Is Brighter Than Dawn

She is brighter than dawn by Michael R. Burch for Beth There’s a light about her like the moon through a mist: a starry candescence with which she is blessed and my heart to her light like the tide now is pulled ... she is fair, O, and bright like the moon silver-veiled. There’s a fire within her like the sun’s leaping forth to lap up the darkness of night from earth's hearth and my eyes to her flame like twin moths now are drawn till my heart is consumed. She is brighter than dawn. Keywords/Tags: Meter, Rhyme, Traditional, Formal, Quatrains, Love, Light, Dawn, Moon, Stars, Heart, Tide, Fair, Bright, Fire, Sun, Dark, Darkness, Night, Hearth, Flame, Moth, Moths

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/25/2020 5:08:00 AM
Wow stunning visionary in your words!
Login to Reply
Burch Avatar
Michael Burch
Date: 2/25/2020 6:12:00 AM
Thanks, I'm glad you think so!
Date: 2/25/2020 12:11:00 AM
Very beautiful, Michael, and so romantic!
Login to Reply
Burch Avatar
Michael Burch
Date: 2/25/2020 4:39:00 AM
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!

Book: Shattered Sighs