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She Fell In Love and the Danger

She fell in love and in danger       
Gathering her wits and her gun       
To break up with dog in manger      
She fell in love and in danger           
He opened the door of chamber        
She fired a shot at her loved one      
She fell in love and in danger        
Gathering her wits and her gun

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September 13, 2014
Form : Triolet (Zeugma)  Lines :She fell in love and the danger        
                                               Gathering her wits and her gun.
Fourth Place win
       
Eight Syllabic lines (Total syllables 64)

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Skat A Date: 5/27/2015 4:57:00 AM Deep thoughtful post Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 10/2/2014 6:21:00 AM Thank you for participating in my contest..I am sorry to be so long in saying my congrats to each one..I enjoyed reading this one..Sara Login to Reply

Robin Davis Date: 9/24/2014 7:30:00 AM Dr Ram An interesting and uniquely creative write. Thank you for the great comment on my Get The Facts poem. Login to Reply

Paul Callus Date: 9/22/2014 2:52:00 PM I think this is supposed to be 'fatal attraction', Dr! Congrats on your fine win. // paul Login to Reply

Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 9/22/2014 12:08:00 PM In love the two main Zeugma lines Dr. Mehta. Congratulations on your win. Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 9/15/2014 10:39:00 AM Oh good luck with this Dr, love the theme and the structure... Login to Reply

Audrey Haick Date: 9/14/2014 7:23:00 PM Excellent job, Dr. Ram! My very best wishes for the contest. Thanks for reading "The Gift". Love, Annalise Login to Reply

Maurice Yvonne Date: 9/14/2014 11:46:00 AM Great form. I loved reading it. Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/14/2014 1:13:00 AM hey you did a GREAT job, Dr. ram. I'll see you on the winner's list!! Login to Reply

Patricia Bernard Date: 9/13/2014 10:25:00 PM Nice Dr. Ram and good luck in the contest:)Tricia Login to Reply

Thvia Shetley Date: 9/13/2014 4:38:00 PM oh the drama! Nicely done x Login to Reply

Dr. Upma A. Sharma Date: 9/13/2014 7:35:00 AM Ah that's awesome Dr Ram! Good luck! Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/13/2014 6:30:00 AM - Yes, this was deep Dr.Ram !! - Well done - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 9/13/2014 6:18:00 AM oh deep and dark write Dr Mehta. I am no fan of firearms at all Hugs Jan xxx Login to Reply

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty Date: 9/13/2014 6:13:00 AM Mehtasaab,I am still in confusion with your poem. A bit tricky development. Please drop some lines. Love. RAJAT Login to Reply