Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Triolet

She Fell In Love and the Danger

She fell in love and in danger       
Gathering her wits and her gun       
To break up with dog in manger      
She fell in love and in danger           
He opened the door of chamber        
She fired a shot at her loved one      
She fell in love and in danger        
Gathering her wits and her gun

                    +++

September 13, 2014
Form : Triolet (Zeugma)  Lines :She fell in love and the danger        
                                               Gathering her wits and her gun.
Fourth Place win
       
Eight Syllabic lines (Total syllables 64)

♡Like0

Share Poem

---

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Skat A May 27, 2015 at 4:57 AM Deep thoughtful post

Sara Kendrick October 2, 2014 at 6:21 AM Thank you for participating in my contest..I am sorry to be so long in saying my congrats to each one..I enjoyed reading this one..Sara

Robin Davis September 24, 2014 at 7:30 AM Dr Ram An interesting and uniquely creative write. Thank you for the great comment on my Get The Facts poem.

Paul Callus September 22, 2014 at 2:52 PM I think this is supposed to be 'fatal attraction', Dr! Congrats on your fine win. // paul

Brenda Meier-Hans September 22, 2014 at 12:08 PM In love the two main Zeugma lines Dr. Mehta. Congratulations on your win.

Harry Horsman September 15, 2014 at 10:39 AM Oh good luck with this Dr, love the theme and the structure...

Audrey Haick September 14, 2014 at 7:23 PM Excellent job, Dr. Ram! My very best wishes for the contest. Thanks for reading "The Gift". Love, Annalise

Maurice Yvonne September 14, 2014 at 11:46 AM Great form. I loved reading it.

Andrea Dietrich September 14, 2014 at 1:13 AM hey you did a GREAT job, Dr. ram. I'll see you on the winner's list!!

Patricia Bernard September 13, 2014 at 10:25 PM Nice Dr. Ram and good luck in the contest:)Tricia

Thvia Shetley September 13, 2014 at 4:38 PM oh the drama! Nicely done x

Dr. Upma A. Sharma September 13, 2014 at 7:35 AM Ah that's awesome Dr Ram! Good luck!

Anne-Lise Andresen September 13, 2014 at 6:30 AM - Yes, this was deep Dr.Ram !! - Well done - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison September 13, 2014 at 6:18 AM oh deep and dark write Dr Mehta. I am no fan of firearms at all Hugs Jan xxx

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty September 13, 2014 at 6:13 AM Mehtasaab,I am still in confusion with your poem. A bit tricky development. Please drop some lines. Love. RAJAT