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She Dreams In Splendours

Knowing that the sky was now open unto her Free Spirits love; emotions deep that her mother Kept secret as if she could hide the desires in her heart Revealed within pages her chest and beautiful girls, making love... Wet fingertips such beauty these fantasies, as she dreamnt breaking All the rules there are no rules merely, fallacies, of forbidden fruit; revelations.

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Debbie Knapp

Date: 6/26/2013 6:35:00 PM

Johnny ~ Life is filled with dreams and why not my friend. Good write. Thanks for visiting my poems too.

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 6/26/2013 10:24:00 AM

Hi Johnny; This is some poem, one that makes you think. Everyone has fantacies and dreams. This was well written. Thanks for sharing and for reading my poem.... Lucilla

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/22/2013 10:32:00 PM

Cont.. ..and people can be who they truelly are.

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/22/2013 10:30:00 PM

I guess this is describing a love which is forbidden in the view of human eye..but who are we to decide for others whom to love.This reminds me of someone in my family.Lately we got to know that He has sentiments for men and not for women.Do i love him less now?Of course not..He is still the cousin i ve always known...and i love him to bits even if my idea of love differs from his. Many people kept their sexual oriebtation a secret in the past..and now am glad the world is more civilized

Cherie Thomas

Date: 6/12/2013 8:36:00 PM

Hi john....amazingly beautiful words, touch the spirit....thankyou:) cherie

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/12/2013 10:03:00 AM

like this John, wonderful poem.