She Devil

She came into my life for her own viscous needs
Just to plant her hateful seed.
She thought that she could use me as her tool
And that I was the perfect fool.

She mistook kindness for weakness.
She thought that she could get her foot in
And create havoc and sin.

Little did she know I was under gods care
And with the world, his love I would share.

Known as the she devil of man
And for all mankind she had a plan.
To destroy the love, faith, and hope
That god had given
And with out that - to her we’d be driven.

Like the snake that she is - hiding in the grass
Waiting for someone to pass.
If you get close to her  you will hear
Her hiss and feel her fangs.
But her venom will not flow
For it has no where’s to go.

How can the venom go into a
body that has the cure
That is so clean, so white ,so pure.
This is the cleansing that we received
At our birth, to free us of our mortal sin
And will not let anything in.

She devil it’s time for you to go
For this soul you will never know.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 4/14/2011 5:00:00 AM
This was a very intense poem and a lovely read(:
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Date: 4/13/2011 11:53:00 AM
I am reading such diverse poems here at PoetrySoup. Poet's hearts are bleeding poetry today. That is where the best poetry comes from. It has been my pleasure to read your poetry today Louis. Continue to write and share it and I will be back to read it. Have a wonderful day and may you find inspiration along the way. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/13/2011 9:39:00 AM
Wow louis ..tremendous lines express the intense emotional feelings .. she done u wrong and it hurst and it is so evident in your lines.. wonderful rhymes throughout this piece add to it's flavor and spice ... enjoyed with luv.
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