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She Dances

She dances she glances Beyond her shoulder She peers Looking back Her beautiful smile She poses in the mirror She waltzes bright salsas With each step, she's bolder No fears Keeping track Her dancing style makes me cheer her

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Paul Callus

Date: 7/7/2023 2:50:00 PM

I enjoyed your take on Rick's starter stanza, Jo. I could never get to grips with ballroom dancing, but love watching others. Somehow, I can imagine a mix of Waltz & Salsa. ~ Regards & Blessings // paul

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/6/2023 4:21:00 AM

This poem is excellent. I love dancing and this is very inspiring :)

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 7/3/2023 5:23:00 PM

I think dancing is thrilling to perform, and just as thrilling to watch. A gorgeous poem, Jo. :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 7/3/2023 2:14:00 PM

Makes me want to put the music on and dance too lol, I like this

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/3/2023 10:17:00 AM

Wonderfully done, Joanna!!! I love seeing these short verses.

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 7/3/2023 9:51:00 AM

Let's dance the last waltz together for tonight. It won't be your last dance. Others are waiting for your salsas. I can hear the music, dear Joanna. Blessings from me too. Don't forget my soup mail.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/3/2023 8:58:00 AM

So beautiful, Joanna! She waltzes bright salsas! Blessings!