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She Dances

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She Dances...Come With Me Her gliding translucence~heaven’s kiss Leaping lightly aswirl in twilight’s sweet mist Her sprite easy leap~grandious pirouette Into the night she blends in a dark silhouette At dawn’s cold grey arrival, I awaken to rain Drops plunking thick up on the window pane Looking back my ballerina appears each night it seems I am with her in every one of my dreams End of late I just close my eyes to see her there And she smiles come with me there’ll be no more despair

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Michael Tor

Date: 7/6/2023 11:37:00 PM

You bring this lovely dancer to life and sensuality Robert, with your impressive words. Love the picture. Great taste in this one and one I think the judge will admire. Thanks for sharing my friend...

Suzanne Delaney

Date: 7/5/2023 7:05:00 PM

A beautiful symbol of grace and a vision that brings peace. Love this one Robert.

Robert Gorelick
Date: 7/6/2023 6:27:00 PM

Thank you, I have to concede that some of my most intimate visions of love, beauty, and kindness have come to me in dreams. Robert

Speaks Volumes

Date: 7/2/2023 6:29:00 AM

Wow I am immersed this morning with wonderful poets. Robert this is an exceptionally wonderful poem. I must be having the same dream because I see your ballerina in my minds eye as she gracefully leaps and dances, smiling to let you know peace and serenity are here. Your stunning words bring your dream to the reader as if we are part of it. Amazing.

Robert Gorelick
Date: 7/3/2023 5:03:00 PM

As a kindred spirit you intuitively sensed my meaning. After all we are the stuff in which dreams are made of. Thank you.