She Cries Tears

Her eyes show so much emotion inside She has certainly formed a trail of tears Leaving marks where the tears rolled down her face There’s no greater pain than what’s on her face The feeling she has, grows from the inside She cries so much there are a lot of tears She knows no other way but to cry tears Sullen look forms on her, right on her face Crying also happens way deep inside From inside she cries tears onto her face
Entrant into Andrea Dietrich's "Introducing Tritina (a new poetry form for you!)" contest 2/12/2013
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Haick Avatar
March 16, 2013 at 5:52 PM
Russell, Congratulations on a very fine win!
Jones Avatar
March 14, 2013 at 6:56 PM
Another great win Russell...many congratulations...Donna
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March 10, 2013 at 9:39 PM
RUSSELL, this happens to be a xool and exciting new form in which Andrea, introduced for her contest. ~ CONGRATULATIONS with your awesome Tritina winning poem. Take Care, LINDA
Dillard Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 12:07 PM
Nicely done and easy to follow,Russell. Congratulations on the placement! Keep up the good work! RAY
Liwayway Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 11:04 AM
Congratulations on your fine win friend Russell :) have a nice day. Maria
Williams Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 7:44 AM
Russell congrats on your win, this is wonderful...David
Gildersleeve Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 7:06 AM
Russell nicely done. I hate those time where sad time brings on the rain. Congrats for your win.
Poet Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 7:03 AM
Love this Russell!Congrats on your win in the contest!
Dietrich Avatar
March 10, 2013 at 12:24 AM
Hi, Russell. Thanks for doing a tritina poem for my contest. congratulations. I enjoyed your sensitive poem.
Haick Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 3:23 PM
This is a sensitive write, Russell, perfect for Andrea's contest! Best wishes for the contest. It was challenging for me but also fun. Always, Annalise
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February 14, 2013 at 4:56 AM
Sestina, very nice. I enjoyed you poem. Good luck in the contest my friend. Warm Smiles, Connie
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February 13, 2013 at 3:48 PM
brave is the one who tries a new form.
Kendrick Avatar
February 13, 2013 at 11:33 AM
Reads like a winner for Andrea's contest..Thanks for stopping by..This ones expresses what so many feel deep inside when life is stressful...Sara
Liwayway Avatar
February 13, 2013 at 8:55 AM
wow!! very nice poem from you friend Russell :) Good luck in the contest :)
Horne Avatar
February 13, 2013 at 8:20 AM
lovely write here, Russell
Carrillo Avatar
February 13, 2013 at 7:46 AM
A beautiful poem Russel. You have no idea of how man tears I have cried like that. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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February 12, 2013 at 9:27 PM
Russell, I'm glad to see you how you pulled off Andrea's new contest theme. I gave it a shot this morning.:-( I've decided 2 try again on Friday. A very sad image. And still your poem is of deep beauty. good luck in the contest.PD
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