She Blew It

I noticed she smoked, unhealthy, but sexy,
and every time our paths came to cross occasionally,
she would always give a warm inviting smile and hello to me.
Once I was admiring her from afar, sensually smoking that cigarette,
when she proceeded to look down upon the ground, and proceeded to spit.
She wasn't sexy anymore. Sorry darling, you blew it.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Downing  Avatar
November 7, 2020 at 9:30 PM
LOL! You just reminded of my dad who couldn’t stand anyone who spit around him. Oh, you made me laugh a good one.
Thekidster Avatar
November 8, 2020 at 5:58 AM
Happy to abide with regards to inducing your laughter. It is in truth the best medicine Akkina.
Dietrich Avatar
November 6, 2020 at 8:13 AM
I like this , Billy.
Thekidster Avatar
November 8, 2020 at 6:00 AM
You like what Andrea? Spitting?.. oh, you mean the write,.. my bad. Hope you're well.
Woodrow Avatar
November 5, 2020 at 7:13 PM
lol! never could abide spitters, male or female, so when I saw tobacco chewers... omg! :)
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