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She Blew It

I noticed she smoked, unhealthy, but sexy, and every time our paths came to cross occasionally, she would always give a warm inviting smile and hello to me. Once I was admiring her from afar, sensually smoking that cigarette, when she proceeded to look down upon the ground, and proceeded to spit. She wasn't sexy anymore. Sorry darling, you blew it.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




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Date: 11/7/2020 9:30:00 PM
LOL! You just reminded of my dad who couldn’t stand anyone who spit around him. Oh, you made me laugh a good one.
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Billy Thekidster
Date: 11/8/2020 5:58:00 AM
Happy to abide with regards to inducing your laughter. It is in truth the best medicine Akkina.
Date: 11/6/2020 8:13:00 AM
I like this , Billy.
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Billy Thekidster
Date: 11/8/2020 6:00:00 AM
You like what Andrea? Spitting?.. oh, you mean the write,.. my bad. Hope you're well.
Date: 11/5/2020 7:13:00 PM
lol! never could abide spitters, male or female, so when I saw tobacco chewers... omg! :)
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