Sean Kelly Poet Cinquain

Shave .

Shave
                                  Razor  kissed  ;
                          Close  call  , another
                     Near  escape  that   we
                                  Missed  .

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Andrea Dietrich February 11, 2011 at 9:34 AM Had to go way back here to find one to comment on. YOu have great humor in your writing. Keep it up, Sean! Luv, Andrea

Doris Culverhouse November 21, 2009 at 6:21 PM very good poem, funny

Sue Mason November 30, 2008 at 6:03 PM LOL with this one, Sean. Glad I don't have to go through that ritual ... great write and a well-deserved feature this week. Congratulations!

Carrie Richards November 30, 2008 at 12:40 PM Enjoyed this one! Congratulations on having this creative poem featured this week! ~ Carrie

Michael Jordan November 29, 2008 at 9:59 PM Sean - Congrats on having your poetry featured this week – Great Job & God Bless, MJ

Vince Suzadail Jr. November 24, 2008 at 7:00 PM Nothing like a close "Shave" to keep life exciting. Congrats on the feature. I'm freezing my butt over here. I'd like to see those 40 shades of green again. Happy Thanksgiving. Vince

Sharon Winter November 24, 2008 at 10:23 AM Congrats Sean on your always enjoyable poetry being featured this week! Why not grow a beard and mustache??? Oh just a thought. : ) Love, Shar

Brian Strand November 23, 2008 at 11:44 PM Congrats on your feature write this week Sean.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.& to think after last Saturday we have the All Blacks this,another record will go!

Nigel Fawcett November 23, 2008 at 11:30 PM Sean, congratulations on your well deserved feature this week. Nigel

Chitra Lakhera November 23, 2008 at 9:58 PM Ouch!! Clever use of the form. It can be interpreted in many ways. Congratulations on being featured. Love, Chitra

November 23, 2008 at 6:50 PM Sean, just wanted to drop by and add congratulations on having your poem featured to my other comment. Keep up the good writing. Wishing you ongoing success. Karen