Shattered Leaves

Shattered leaves
autumn's wave swirls
on old trees
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Merryman Avatar
March 21, 2012 at 4:06 PM
Congrats on your HM in PD's contest, Adeleke! Love, Kim
Brown Avatar
March 19, 2012 at 6:24 AM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "Haiku" contest Adeleke. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
March 18, 2012 at 5:22 PM
this is lovely, Adeleke. Next time put your name on it. She has told us in the blogs that we need our names on all our entries for her contests. Then I am sure you will score higher!!
Taylor Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 8:36 AM
Congrats, Adeleke. Excellent. Enjoyed. Nice going. Ralph
A   Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 10:57 PM
ADELEKE, ~.Congratulations in my haiku contest ;-) THANK YOU FOR SUPPORTING ;-) my contest... Enjoyed your entry,~ always*PD
Mclaughlin Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 3:46 AM
I get an impression of falling leaves here and the bareness of the trees without their cover. Well done.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace