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Shattered Illusions

I dream of many things, none of this reality Fantasy is the life force that sustains me To live as I want, however I choose To change myself at will be someone new Exciting, sexy, dangerous,hot love and adventure That is not reality and I know it, yet still I live in dreams Sad hopeless illusions, can't grasp with hands They slip through like sand in a sieve When I wake I cry Cry for things that don't exist Cry for the reality that is me, my life Why must life shatter all illusions of fantasy.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/9/2013 12:13:00 PM
Wendy, your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers, Stopping by with a nice and sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup fan and "FRIEND"....... God Bless........... Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 7/9/2013 2:57:00 AM
- Hi Wendy, a well written poem. - Welcome to P-Soup. - Thanks for your first poem, hope there will be many more in the future. - Have fun with poetry. - Good luck! - Greetings from Norway / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/9/2013 12:09:00 AM
already I love your poetry.. sad when love slips like sand... wish it was like mud pies,,easy to grip on... sad you feel like this above... you write good... xox~ Linda
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Date: 7/9/2013 12:08:00 AM
Hi Wendy-Dropping in with a nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I’m here to invite you on over to my contest. You will find the contest page on the top left hand side* -If you ever need or seek feedback on a certain poem, click on my name any time you like. I’m looking forward in following and reading your poetry. Hope to hear from you soon. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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