Shattered Heart and Soul

You looked at me with love in your eyes,
But it was all a lie.
You held me in your arms,
But it was not genuine.
You kissed me to show me you cared,
But it wasn't meant for me.
It was a farce.
You watched me sleep quietly,
But your mind was not on me.
I woke up everyday with you on my mind ,in my heart,
But I was't the one in your mind,
Why?? I don't know,I am confused.
You meant the world to me,
But you shattered my heart.
You ripped by soul.
You said you love me,
But you didn't mean to,
What a lie.
You saw my tears and my heart breaking  into a million pieces ,
But you watched and didn't care 
I walked away,
But you didn't come after me.
You saw my pain,
But you never said sorry.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 3/30/2011 6:30:00 PM
hey thanks you all.I lost my writing years ago and now started again .It's always been who i am not doing it to win just to be heard and appreciated.Thanks for the confidence and god bless.
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Date: 3/30/2011 7:04:00 AM
very effective expressions of thoughts on betrayal in love, Shivanee
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Date: 3/30/2011 4:18:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Shivanee. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Enter and enjoy some of the contests and I wish you the best in them. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/29/2011 8:25:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your poetry with it's creative theme.. hope your time on P.S. will be fun and filled with sharing with luv... our contests are free to enter so please check them out and good luck luv..
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