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Shattered Heart

Shattered Heart

Take this shattered heart

Help me to make a new start –

New approaches wait

lost lovesenryu

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David Smalling

Date: 10/6/2010 5:26:00 AM

This is quite a prayer, and such a tender resolution, I love the warmth, the humanness, the sensitivity.

Margeret Bailey

Date: 8/29/2010 9:55:00 PM

An appropriate expressio of pain. Thanks!

Veronica Joseph

Date: 8/17/2010 1:45:00 PM

wonderful to read, to feel and think about.

Jamecia Buggs

Date: 8/17/2010 12:40:00 PM

So much hope : ) its put a smile to my face

Matthew Anish

Date: 8/16/2010 2:35:00 PM

Dear Carolyn, I pray that your health is O.K. Your poem is full of hope! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Jerri Ward

Date: 8/16/2010 4:00:00 AM

Carolyn, A beautiful, inspiring write. Thank you for commenting on my win. Blessings, Jerri

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 8/15/2010 5:52:00 PM

enjoyed reading today.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 8/15/2010 5:42:00 AM

Very good!!!! perfect entry in contest!! always Michael

Daver Austin

Date: 8/14/2010 11:16:00 AM

I agree with Karen. Good to hear a positive note. Luck in the contest. Love,Dave

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/14/2010 4:44:00 AM

Nice thoughts well expressed, Good luck

John Rhinem

Date: 8/14/2010 4:30:00 AM

Smile ~ And yet amid the same time I am hoping that this is merely a moment of creativities flowings from "Your Brilliant Pen Dear Lady;" either or as I have just mentioned; "Profound & Beautifully Stirring" ~ I hope that life is treating "You" wonderfully I pray, "Priceless Carolyn Devonshire" and, "My Love & Warmth to You Always, & All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have The Most Magical of Days Dear Beautiful Carolyn, Wrapped Within Love;" Bye Precious Lady!:) ~

John Rhinem

Date: 8/14/2010 4:19:00 AM

Smile? ~ This poems is a heart-wrencher dearest lady ~ "Hello Beyond Precious, Gifted & Beautiful Carolyn Devonshire!!!" ~ What has brought such sorrow upon "Your Priceless Beautiful Heart!!?" ~ I hope that whatever it may be may be quickly within passing and, I am glad to somehow see a bit of hopeful resolve towards hopes gathering amid "Your Loveliness'" final verse ~ ....Cont:)

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/13/2010 11:57:00 PM

awesome Carolyn such sensitivity, good luck in contest, Harry.

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 8/13/2010 9:35:00 PM

Great write, Carolyn. Here you have shown the emotions and the optimism that wait when we realize that new approaches will come into our lives. Good luck in the contest with this. Dan C ps. What was address of that website you told me about. I didn't write it down...duh!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/13/2010 8:43:00 PM

wonderful, carolyn (I could think of absolutely nothing for this one!) Come see my blog if you can! it's sad how few people are going to the blogs lately! Luv, Andrea

Ronald Bingham

Date: 8/13/2010 7:44:00 PM

You know they've got a new pill out for that, just kidding trying to make you smile. God Bless and keep. Ron

Chris Smith

Date: 8/13/2010 7:30:00 PM

Shattered heart can be mended when someone loves each piece, great write my friend.

Tim Ryerson

Date: 8/13/2010 4:31:00 PM

A heartbreaker gem from you as usual, Carolyn...love the hope-filled ending! Looks like you got another winner here! - Tim

Jay Del Fierro

Date: 8/13/2010 3:23:00 PM

broke but not poor,here'n there but never ignored,is a heart which sings of moments adored....just had to do that,since we can all be inspiring in our own ways :)....nice write....peace , jay

Lynette Chachere

Date: 8/13/2010 2:48:00 PM

a new start in time always puts the pieces back together.you just have to find the right way.good luck, Csrolyn. ~Always&Forever

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/13/2010 1:48:00 PM

Good write that should do well in the contest..Hope that the shattered heart mends with not scaring..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 8/13/2010 1:27:00 PM

Though sad, Carolyn, your Senryu is well written. Hope you are alright, my friend. Good luck in the contest. Best wishes, Caroline.

Wilma Neels

Date: 8/13/2010 11:43:00 AM

The desire to change can be a start of transformation.. Love this write Carolyn, all the best for the contest my friend. Enjoy your weekend, love Wilma

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 8/13/2010 11:34:00 AM

Hi Carolyn, I love the positive resolution you have written for beginning a fresh start. Everyone, at one time or another, must stop, assess their life and its direction, stop, recharge, re-set...and go in a new and better direction. Much said in this wise and emotion filled poem. Thank you so much for treating me to dinner last night. It was a true delight to sit and visit with you. I will try to see you in September. Love you, Dane Ann

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 8/13/2010 10:51:00 AM

Great truth revealed in this beautiful Senryu with the touch of despair but hopes prevailing to keep the life rolling. Brilliant piece of writing my friend from your beautiful and seasoned pen. And many thanks for your lovely precious comments on my poem Evening Music of Nature. Love and best wishes always....Ravindra......Carolyn Devonshire.

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